Check out this trippy little diddy I whipped together today. I put a lot effects on the vocals so its hard to understand but thats kinda the sound I was going for. It might be a bit to tripped out for some, but I like how it overall turned out. Let me know what you think.

Ok I think I got it working

I understand that you wanted a lot of effects on the vox...but I think perhaps it is too much...I find myself spending too much time trying to decipher what the lyrics are instead of being able to sit back and relax (which - if the vox were a little clearer I could easily do to this song )

Sounds pretty good...I like the guitar...the simplicity...the dischordance of the lead break is cool...nice change at the end....remix this and I think you'll have a gem 

way to much on the reverb for vocals...nice melody though

Flyer

too much reverb. sounds like you are sitting on wc while another one plays the guitar. Please rerecord it, please!!!!!........