#1August 20th, 2006 · 11:44 AM
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11 posts

This song is not in a battle

I'm only learning to play at the moment but this is something i've been experimenting with today

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#2August 20th, 2006 · 12:41 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
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Nice, keep practicing.You have a good ear for a nice melody and the foundation for a great song.Don't put the guitar down!

OH, welcome to the amp.
#3August 20th, 2006 · 01:20 PM
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Cheers mate, this site is a great idea. I'll see if i can expand on this track in the future.
#4August 20th, 2006 · 04:31 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
I agree - this is a nice start.
I was disappointed that it didn't continue.
Recording seems a little quiet, but it's nice and clear
Chord progression is pretty good.
A few messy bits in there - but you're just starting so you can work at it
Keep it up
#5August 20th, 2006 · 04:47 PM
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Yeah does get a bit messy, started to loose me thread a bit at some points. Needs a lot of work, extending like you said, not to mention lyrics etc.
Used a free music recording software that i nabbed off someone, cubase VST i think, and a cheapy 20 squid mike.
#6August 20th, 2006 · 05:51 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
well see here,

    i have no clue about guitar playing chord progression and what not, but i though that was just beautiful, and i too was a bit disapointed that the endding came, and was sort of abert. but oh well, work in progress that is, and a darned good one, i cant wait to hear more

paper doll

oh and yes, welcome to band amp we are glad to have you here, so just make your self at home and have fun!
#7August 20th, 2006 · 08:11 PM
11 threads / 11 songs
73 posts
Nice little piece. As by now you know, we want more! Keep the touch light though...it really works with the theme. A string (cello, violin) could be a great addition to the winter quality.
#8August 21st, 2006 · 12:59 AM
159 threads / 32 songs
1,956 posts
United States of America
very good recording
the sound of your guitar is nice, just goes to show that in the right hands you don't need expensive gear. just a good ear.  pretty decent recording ditto to the previous post and again welcome to Bandamp.
#9August 21st, 2006 · 01:03 AM
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54 posts
I agree with the others there is alot of potential in this tune
#10August 21st, 2006 · 11:31 AM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Welcome to the amp! 

A pretty nice first post...like everyone says, there is loads of potential here...keep practicing...and recording...and we'll keep listening 
#11August 21st, 2006 · 02:05 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
11 posts
cheers everyone, i'll have to try and remember the chords i used to do a better more finished version. They were the first ones to come into me head, i'm glad the mic was turned on.

good idea jefferson, i love the sound of a cello there's nothing else like it.
#12August 23rd, 2006 · 02:01 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
nice melody..reminds me a lil of Donavan...yeah most deff will be looking for the finished product

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