#1August 18th, 2006 · 05:26 PM
21 threads / 16 songs
49 posts
Peru
_Detenerte_
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The lyrics are in spanish and my voice is not really good, but I like the music (and the lyrics). These are the lyrics:

Si tratara de detenerte
por una sola vez
de detenerte
con un crisol de luz
de detenerte

Ay, serías esa luz
que fué, que fué, que fué
en el invierno anterior
en las lunas pasadas
y el tiempo vivido
que nunca tendré,
que se fué.

Si tratara de detenerte
con una sábana mágica
  • con mil canciones de amor

Serías esa penumbra
que fué, que fué, que fué
en las noches desiertas
de lluvias perdidas
y el mar solitario
que nunca tendré,
que se fué.

Más si llegara a detenerte
si se pararan la luna y el mar
si se pararan el tiempo y el sol

Ay, no serías la luz
que se va, que va, que va
en las mañanas al lado del mar
en mis sueños nocturnos
y el tiempo estrellado
que pronto vendrá.

This is the english translation for the lyrics, I hope I did it right:

If I'd try to stop you
for a single time
to stop you
with a light crucible
to stop you

Oh, you would be that light
thas was, that was, thas was
in the last winter
in the past moons
and the lived time
that I'll never have,
that is gone.

If I'd try to stop you
with a magical sheet
or with a thousand love songs

You would be that shadow
that was, that was, that was
in the desert nights
of lost rains
and the lonely sea
that I'll never have,
that is gone.

But if I'd get to stop you
if the moon and the sea stops
if time and the sun stops

Oh, you won't be the light
thas goes, that goes, that goes
in the morning next to the sea
in my nocturnal dreams
and the starred time
that soon will come.

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#2August 18th, 2006 · 06:30 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Very nice,including your voice.I have always loved spanish vox,I don't understand it but it sounds so lovely and I let the music write the lyrics for me while listening.Only suggestion is the volume....I know you want it quiet and loud but sometimes for me the voice is being overpowered.Love the outro.
#3August 19th, 2006 · 05:59 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
Germany
Hey man.

This is awesome music. You need a professional studio recording. I can imagine a great recording with this kind of music. Guitar technique seems to be great. Go ahead
#4August 21st, 2006 · 01:08 AM
30 threads / 5 songs
757 posts
Australia
yummy emotive expressive and pro standard.
Pleaaaseee record these gems well, they will stand the test of time  
#5August 21st, 2006 · 10:58 AM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
sounds like a nice tune from what I can hear...I have to agree with the others..please record this better...I think it will be great!  sounds like lovely guitar playing..and don't be so self depricating about the vox - they're okay! 
#6August 23rd, 2006 · 05:18 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
beautiful.
#7September 3rd, 2006 · 11:30 PM
34 threads / 16 songs
538 posts
Mexico
Singing is a bit off key sometimes... lyrics are interesting. Nice song for the genre (trova), but I most say it does not sound very original to me.  Nice guitar playing, intro sounds a bit too messy though.
#8September 11th, 2006 · 12:19 AM
159 threads / 32 songs
1,956 posts
United States of America
pretty good
I like your playing, very emotional. The vocals are decent just a couple of rough spots.
your guitar playing is pretty good.  good job
#9June 19th, 2009 · 04:16 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
3 posts
United States of America
Excelente guitarra
La ejecucion de la guitarra esta super bien.  La voz es cuestion nada mas de sacarla, se oye un poco detenida.  He visto varias de tus canciones y la verdad me llama mucho la atencion tu sensitividad.
#10June 21st, 2009 · 04:57 PM
9 threads / 8 songs
207 posts
United Kingdom
I love this style of guitar (trova I think someone mentioned)...really emotive.  Its already been said a whole bunch of times, but I agree that you should try and get this proffessionaly recorded and it would sound absolutley stunning.  Or there are a whole wealth of people on bandamp who could help ya out with creating your own home setup that sounds pretty good too I'm sure.  Great piece of music though!

Kobeshi
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