I like the strings that start at the middle of the song. Reminds me a monster breathing. I should have made a bigger crescendo.

you can add  some human voices or aria...

reminded me of FinalFantasyVII's Jenova theme... maybe it's just because it's in the same key

(it's not a bad thing, to sound like jenova theme!)

if it's meant to be a short, and if it's more of a background style thing, then it's great.  if you wanted to make it longer, i think a climatic drum roll into higher pitches for the strings would be awesome.  great job though

It's great hearing things like this. This wasn't especially 'a song', more like a tune for a topical tv-program. It's heard that you have will to express yourself with music, though, I get a bit introvert feeling of your stuff.