... of the Whale. It's not so good since it's made with some samples, and what I did it's not so original.
Anyway I like it, I hope you like it too.
But take this as a noodle, it's not a serious song, maybe it isn't a song...
Thanks for your comments.

(i changed the title of the song because it was wrong)

Well I would have gone for a theme overall the song but I guess then it wouldn't be a noodle right?  Some eq work will suite right, I think.

Also I was wondering about a more complex drum line... let the drums noodle as well 

you know this is going somewhere  mmmm ,yeah eq yaddayadda but the gem is there .

I like it though - the choir sound in background sets a very mystic atmosphere. In fact I think the construction is really interesting.. maybe the bass instrument isn't so hot... a bit too "bright".. how can I explain - maybe it should be more bassy, pounding, instead having brighness and transparency.. if that makes sense.

but it's nice, filmic in a way. nice one yeah!

great effects...nice work


Flyer Not the Silent Fly(er)

hey bro!

This song is a kind of Phoenix, you burn the tunes and born a great song from the ashen

You'll get my high and family vote!!

Dodo

Thank you all.
I would like to improve it, please tell me how, by the way I'll work on the eq (whatever it means) 
I'll wait patiently.

wow. such softness in the drumtrack. just love it.
deep.

oh this has tons of potential .. you should work this up some more.. I really like the background layers against the rhythms.  I give this a very good vote.

Keep it up!  Reminds me of part to the soundtrack to the Mind's Eye Computer Animation series.

55%...whales are huge creatures, but mixing their barks with smooth sounds is quite unimaginative. However, swell job on the mix.

there are neither whales nor their barks.
i'm redoing this, there will be no gregorian chants, a bassy bass, more noodles on the drum track, etc, i dont know what else, but no whales, that's sure.
thanks for your votes, i don't care if i lose, i don't like this version anyway.

If thinks it's short life is very suiting. It's small but powerful and leaves you wanting to hear more.

Very relaxing. Kind of sounds very... watery? Kind of like you're in the ocean.

I love the atmosphere!!!!