Is just the beginning of somthing I hope I finish someday

it feels like a tango in the closet, let it out

Its sounds a little bit Beethoven,...Schubert, i like it a lot.
Try to work it out more though.
And perhaps create your first masterpiece(many times covered by all these guys from the Amp).

man u can play......................

now think about the venue------------Bandamp-------------a venue for songwriters on the whole and a tendency to play modern genres.........also........think about the form of the piece................ at the moment it is a string of great ideas............needs a start middle and end.start development recap etc.............I'm pretty sure u understand having spent hours practising your skill.

constructive I hope

splash