#1August 8th, 2006 · 03:37 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
35 posts
Sweden
Your Hero
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This song is not in a battle


This is a heavy lovesong. Maybe too heavy



[Verse]
If you were an angel would I look up to see you smiling every day
Or would I look into the clouds and slowly let you fade away
No, that is not the case this day
My highest wish is to make you stay
As long as you wish I’ll be there for you
I want to know it’s me and you

And if you were the ocean would I dive and try so hard to be those things
Try to be the things you need and be the one who gives you wings
Well, I could give up all my dreams
Because my life my joy it seems
To belong to you please stay with me
Stay here for all eternity

[Chorus]
And you can call me your hero ‘cause that’s what I want to be
And I want to be your shelter ‘cause you’re the one I need
What I would do without you the thought has crossed my mind
I can’t imagine how I’d feel if you left me behind

[Verse]
If the storm was ruling in the dark or if I couldn't move my feet
I would get to you somehow to feel your body to feel your heat
And no one can stop me from doing this cause you're important in my life
I will never fall behind I will never give up my strife

Not even a mountain would be a wall or an obstruction worth to name
My love is equal to concrete so if I fail I'll live in shame
Therefore I want my life to contain a part of you a part of me
Please don't break this pleasure of mine don't let me live in misery

[Chorus]
You can call me your hero cause that's what I want to be
And I want to be your shelter ‘cause you’re the one I need
What I would do without you the thought has crossed my mind
I can’t imagine how I’d feel if I would be left behind

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#2August 13th, 2006 · 05:55 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
I love this, but seriously needs drums.
#3August 16th, 2006 · 12:25 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
ha
A to heavy love song  lol...naw this is cool....Basket has a good point..and I agree  Drums would rock this song...good mix ....

Flyer
#4August 16th, 2006 · 06:16 PM
3 posts
United States of America
This song is pretty good but u need to add drums really bad
#5August 25th, 2006 · 09:17 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
I have similar thoughts on this one as on your song "Do You Believe".

It's a draft song that can be played to other band members to find out whether they think it's worth trying to play.

Again, I think this song has merits - but it needs to be developed and re-recorded with a decent instrumental backing.  Naturally drums are needed as others have said, but just the addition of drums wouldn't be enough.

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