Nobody knows what's happening when you have touch the ground in your tomb. But what do you think?


[Verse]
What happens when we die please someone tell
is there a heaven or is there even a hell
give it a thought that's all I'm asking you
when you die maybe your dreams will come true

Well I don't know I'm just a believer I know I am
but tell me what do you believe
will our souls continue living who knows
tell me what do you believe

[Chorus]
Do you believe there is a life after both of us have died
and do you believe there is a chance to be a bird
will our souls last forever or in silence dissappear
will they fly to a place where nobody can here

[Verse]
Have you ever lost someone who ment so much to you
don't you wonder what she's going to do
when she comes to the other side the other side of space
will she ever be albe to see your face

Well that depends on what she believes you know what I mean
yes you know exactly what I mean
does she believe in life on the other side
does she believe in life after dead

[Chorus]
Do you believe there is a life after both of us have died
and do you believe there is a chance to be a bird
will our souls last forever or in silence dissappear
will they fly to a place where nobody can here

not bad...good recording/sound...a few more instrument would only be a plus...bass,more lead guitar,some keys...your vocals are good...keep it going

Flyer

As a starting point, this is pretty good.  By that I mean it's like a draft of the song yet to come - something you'd play to other band members to say "so what do you think of this one then?"

So in answer to that, as yet unspoken, question I'd say.......
.......it sounds good.

The overall construction works well
The guitar line is simple, but has the potential to sound great
The vocal melody is fine - some work needed to vary it a little and keep the listener interested

Yup - this could work well.  But......... You need to develop the sound with other instruments.  My thoughts are that at the very least it needs a single subtle overdriven guitar playing the main riff; distorted lead coming in with some nice little twiddly bits; some harmonies on vocals; and definitely bass and drums.