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#1August 8th, 2006 · 12:32 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
The Wizard
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May I present: The Wizard

I apologize in advance for the quality of the recording. It was done under... unfortunate circumstances...

I apologize also in advance for my half-ass job on the piano... eh, I'm learning.

Now... tear it to shreds.

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#2August 8th, 2006 · 06:57 AM
4 threads / 1 songs
42 posts
Portugal
this is absolutely gorgeous!!very nice job..and would you mind posting the lyrics??..i wanted to try something and if it works i'll show you later if you want..

well back to the review:lovely song, good work on the piano,voice fits very well but you should try and make it smoother..more magical combining with the song, could be a bit longer..a treat for my ears
#3August 8th, 2006 · 08:36 AM
17 threads / 16 songs
81 posts
Philippines
I have just listened , and my mouth is still open knowing not what to say...its because of the magic of the song You never deceived me my friend since i arrived on this forum.Again a great inspiration well put down on the tape(old image).Congratulations , and i like this "not too good rec "of the piano wich gives an impression of old fasion recording.You want to live happy? Never gives away your talent!
#4August 8th, 2006 · 11:47 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
Lyrics
As time begins to fly,
as the seasons start to turn around,
all the people go mad,
as they lose what they had,
and the wizard with all his magic,
can only stand by watching helplessly,
as the angels and the demons prevail,

showing off their golden rays,
and laughing at the wasted days,
the heavenly all mitigate,
while the lowly try to tolerate,
and the wizard with his magic wand,
can only wonder what's in store beyond,

and the clouds turn gray
and the raindrops are falling down from heaven...



there you have it.
vocals should be smoother... you're right.
thanks
#5August 8th, 2006 · 11:48 AM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
Very reminiscent of 70's classic rock type music... Nice construction, albeit - I'm dead sure I've heard that initial piano progression before... Well I wouldn't mind hearing this on a classic rock radio in a few years time

The voice doubling may be a little bit too present though, it would be more interesting to have fewer lines done in with such thick layering. But overall, it's a very good little tune.
#6August 8th, 2006 · 11:58 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
35 posts
Sweden
Nice upload!
Very calm and soft sound on this song.  Very nice melody.
But I must say that this song isn't my... as you say it "cup of tee"...
but the melody, your voice AND the Piano is veery nice.

//Adam
#7August 8th, 2006 · 02:06 PM
190 threads / 27 songs
2,845 posts
Germany
Yes gorgeous music.

If only I could play such a lovely piano.....
#8August 8th, 2006 · 10:18 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
nice
Nice Ben...I think the song stands on its own....I wouldnt change a thing..I like it.. the piano sounds wonderful...and your voice is loud and clear.....all around nice effort....
take care

Ralph
#9August 8th, 2006 · 10:34 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
209 posts
India
typing as i hear..
the quality of the recording does gives an effect of old times....

the song is great!!!!

more like the songs of EDUCATEDGUESS....i am not saying that you dont have your own style..but yeah...this is good!!!!

probably too short...
but hey WHEN ONE SONG ENDS THEN ONLY A NEW SONG BEGINS...
so with this note i take a leave from you ben...

just be what you are...coz you are great!!!

well now i 'll vote...

-Aks
#10August 9th, 2006 · 11:21 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
i dont know why but after i listened to this song about a million times, the million and first brought tears to my eyes...i love your voice like it is, ruff like this, it gives it charictor i think, i wouldent change a thing. though i do agree it is a bit short, my ears never really get to hear your voice like this and it makes them happy untill the song ends then they yell at me to turn it on again... more? please? even if it is a diffrent song add vocals like this once again?

you doll
pap
#11August 10th, 2006 · 08:29 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
my god now you've don it ben... ive had this blasted son gstuck in my head ALL day! do you know what thats like? its driveing me mad... thi sis what happens when you put out music that is not worthy of the music gods! it slowly drives us mere mortles insain!

i had to sign on to band amp just to listeen to it again, gah!
#12August 23rd, 2006 · 03:15 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Lovely sound - I like the vocal delivery especially
Well pieced together
Well played
The recording is good - it's just not excellent like some of your other stuff

You sure as hell are one talented guy!
#13August 23rd, 2006 · 04:56 PM
24 threads / 9 songs
284 posts
Mexico
I'm surprised with your talent taka

and you apollogize about this?

I must say apollogize because I can't hear all those technical troubles.

good job

Dodo
#14October 26th, 2006 · 03:18 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
you should do more of this stuff, too.

because its so beautiful!
#15November 19th, 2006 · 04:22 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
38 posts
United States of America
I like it...
Yeah,  i like it ,  I'm just beginning to get into this site, but have listened to several of your songs, and seem to keep coming back,   nice...   hp
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