I made this song for a diabolo presentation

very good drums and bass to start, although they dont really seem to crescendo much, the guitar tone i dont personally like but i see that it fits very well with the sound your going for, maybe add a little chorus to smooth it out or turn the bass up a little, but except for that a very cool song, great for chilling to

Nice groovin intro bass riff! Song kinda loses steam towards the middle. Guitar sound is a bit thin. I like the recurring guitar theme but I think it needs to be a little more polished and pumped up a little.

U need to work on this song a little bit, I like the melody and main theme but later on when you improvise...you kinda don't know what to play and lose youself.... But I like your groove. I can see this song in a movie, in a comedy. Keep rockin' and good luck.

I have a feeling your going to do much better later on. Very nice groove to the song! That bas line had me hooked. Although it was repetitive which kinda ruins it for me. All in all very nice though.

need to play from the soul instead of what you think it should sound like. You have a good melody but you play the lead the way you think it should be. just relax and don't over think the lead. It'll work...

I'm sure the bass line is a direct korn rip. Otherwise very inventive!

This song could be a lot better with some work on the production, and not so much lead guitar in minor key while the rhythm guitar is playing a major. There are some major clashes when those two collide. Other than that, very good.

Very nice Bass stream. ;]
But agreed, repetitive.

sounds like it was made on a computer, there is no soul, apart from the guitar ill give you that, its got its goods and bads

it was made on a computer, apart from the guitar.

Did you mean that you made this for a presentation of the Diablo Computer game?  if so, then it is very fitting the computer synth backing track.....  very well done.....

    A bit choppy, but overall well done.... I like it....

              I could see some extra stuff tossed in occasionaly, some samples, maybe some weird little twinkly noises here and there.... 

         anyway, again, well done...
                         Jim K

yeh.. was it for the game? if not.. I don't understand.. but that's not important

well, if it was made for a game, it is very fitting indeed.

like said... meh... bit repetitive. though, it's good that you varied the drums in certain spots instead of just letting one continuous loop drone on.

guitar playing not bad, not bad at all...

2:38 is really nice..

ps - yea diablo ... mmm... I remember those good old days... 96 cold sorc think I was... ok, enough of THAT...

It wasn't made for the game. It was made for a diabolo (not diablo) show.

http://www.unefoisuncirque.ch/Festivals/Festival_2004/photos/ufuc/b13-diabolo-noe3.JPG

bass played good but guitar could be better