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#1May 10th, 2005 · 01:00 AM
3 threads / 1 songs
9 posts
United Kingdom
pet ramblings
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Score: 63.6%
Rank: 19th
Battle: 2005-05


10 mins to write, 10 mins to record, can u tell lol

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#2May 16th, 2005 · 07:59 AM
15 posts
Australia
quite talented for 10 mins
#3May 16th, 2005 · 01:52 PM
2 posts
United Kingdom
Very groovy. I recomend about half way through the song before people loose interest you come in with a cick ass distorted White Stripes style version off the riff up the tempo, bring in some drums and bring the roof down with a kick ass blues solo......  but its still very good as it is of course.
#4May 17th, 2005 · 08:30 PM
4 threads / 1 songs
28 posts
United States of America
Reminds me of Nirvana's About A Girl mixed with Subterranean Homesick Blues. Not nearly as focused as either one, though.
#5May 18th, 2005 · 07:02 AM
8 threads / 3 songs
102 posts
United Kingdom
Good tune... Fill it out a bit though, crank it up a notch...
#6May 18th, 2005 · 07:47 PM
4 posts
Canada
Good work getting all those rhymes cohesive.  Gets a little tired about half way through didn't really keep my interest.  Maybe think about adding some sort of bridge
#7May 20th, 2005 · 01:33 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
36 posts
United States of America
ok but a little empty sounding....needs more filler to sound full. it'll do... keep pushing forward.
#8May 20th, 2005 · 02:50 PM
13 posts
United States of America
The song is good but you need more power in the vocals.It's a little too bland.
#9May 21st, 2005 · 04:47 PM
9 posts
United States of America
Pretty good I guess. The guitar overpowers your voice and is kind of hard to understand at times. But good lyrics for putting it together in 10 minutes.
#10May 22nd, 2005 · 01:38 AM
28 threads / 20 songs
255 posts
Australia
aaron, im thinking more REM - End of the world, actually im more than thinking i mean those versus are very similar as in the feel of it. not really a song you can say has much in it but ofcourse that can be easily blamed on the amount of time you have put into it
#11May 23rd, 2005 · 08:05 PM
14 threads / 12 songs
177 posts
United States of America
Very Dylanlike. It's pretty cool. You should open up your sound editor and get rid of that noise in the beginning though.
#12May 29th, 2005 · 11:33 PM
25 posts
United Kingdom
Very good, but i would reccomend a nifty change of notes.
#13May 31st, 2005 · 02:46 AM
Yeah chauvette, the vocals are Dylanlike, i thought that, too. And i like that! The point is: Decide if you sing like Dylan or don't sing like Dylan at all. U're between these. I would like even more Dylan in your voice
Good Job!
#14May 31st, 2005 · 02:27 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
19 posts
United Kingdom
dont get rid of beggining sound ...it for some reason sounds quite fun. very good. like lazy vocals.
#15May 31st, 2005 · 02:27 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
19 posts
United Kingdom
dont get rid of beggining sound ...it for some reason sounds quite fun. very good. like lazy vocals.
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