10 mins to write, 10 mins to record, can u tell lol

quite talented for 10 mins

Very groovy. I recomend about half way through the song before people loose interest you come in with a cick ass distorted White Stripes style version off the riff up the tempo, bring in some drums and bring the roof down with a kick ass blues solo......  but its still very good as it is of course.

Reminds me of Nirvana's About A Girl mixed with Subterranean Homesick Blues. Not nearly as focused as either one, though.

Good tune... Fill it out a bit though, crank it up a notch...

Good work getting all those rhymes cohesive.  Gets a little tired about half way through didn't really keep my interest.  Maybe think about adding some sort of bridge

ok but a little empty sounding....needs more filler to sound full. it'll do... keep pushing forward.

The song is good but you need more power in the vocals.It's a little too bland.

Pretty good I guess. The guitar overpowers your voice and is kind of hard to understand at times. But good lyrics for putting it together in 10 minutes.

aaron, im thinking more REM - End of the world, actually im more than thinking i mean those versus are very similar as in the feel of it. not really a song you can say has much in it but ofcourse that can be easily blamed on the amount of time you have put into it

Very Dylanlike. It's pretty cool. You should open up your sound editor and get rid of that noise in the beginning though.

Very good, but i would reccomend a nifty change of notes.

Yeah chauvette, the vocals are Dylanlike, i thought that, too. And i like that! The point is: Decide if you sing like Dylan or don't sing like Dylan at all. U're between these. I would like even more Dylan in your voice
Good Job!

dont get rid of beggining sound ...it for some reason sounds quite fun. very good. like lazy vocals.

dont get rid of beggining sound ...it for some reason sounds quite fun. very good. like lazy vocals.