Very mature sound, bring the voice up a little more, awesome song, excellent.
great song but amanda, got some critiquing for you. #1 : work on your vocal breathing. open your ribs and hold it. It's too choppy at times and you seem to lose it. #2 : When you go to force it don't force so much, it makes breathing harder just open your mouth push a little and you'll get A LOT louder. #3 : The Song - it needs to be more flowy, with all that up and down your voice sometime will crack or drop at the end and it may sound emotional but instead it sounds un-proffesional. Don't mean to sound so hard but I really like this song and it could be AMAZING!
Erica
Erica
What a voice it fits perfect to this kind a music the guitar is nice well but the voice makes the song maybe with a piano this song would be perfect. The song has lot of potential keep playing that music
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Well this song is pretty old now since im 15 now.so who knows if people even coment anymore.. lol but yes i wrote this song myself with martin (brownsugar) Anyways i new it was on here but i neverreally checked it out! id love to put out mroe stuff iy ya'll will listen to it!!
thanx so much for all the help and coments ill take em all to thought!!
Luv YA!
Manda
Well this song is pretty old now since im 15 now.so who knows if people even coment anymore.. lol but yes i wrote this song myself with martin (brownsugar) Anyways i new it was on here but i neverreally checked it out! id love to put out mroe stuff iy ya'll will listen to it!!
thanx so much for all the help and coments ill take em all to thought!!
Luv YA!
Manda
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