I agree with pretty much everything takaminerbb13 said. I do like the chorus, but adding some other instruments, slightly change it up a bit would help the repetitiveness of the chorus.

Great!

your feedback has been exceptional!
this song that you herd is the rough mix for the album it's missing the bass and piano
now, as for the vocals, that's it 

thanks again for the feed back, I am very impressed with the comments

Truly yours

Rod

Gotta agree that the whispered sections of the vox could be a tiny tiny bit louder in the mix.  It almost sounds like a song from Pink (or at least I think thats the artist I'm thinking of) and call me crazy, but because of this I was kind of expecting heavy/distorted guitars to come in for a simple yet powerful chorus, but that clearly was not the effect you were going for haha.  Like it all the same though - would have to agree with whoever said that the chorus effect would me more effective if it was alternated with something sligtly different instead of being there throughout the entire song.