well, here it is....

        Tell me what ya think....

GOOD JOB JIM,I CAN DIG IT,NICE CHORDS,THE STRUCTURE GOES WELL WITH YOUR VOICE,WHICH BY THE WAY HAS IMPROVED SINCE I FIRST HEARD YOU ON THE AMP.

you make me alright too

despite the bad mp3 quality. but missing a bass

I agree about the vocals - much better delivery than on some of your other songs on this site.  But then I've heard your version of "Horse with no name" so I know you can do GREAT vocals!

The guitar playing's coming along well Jim..... you'll soon be there challenging Iszil! hehe

your vocals are really improving Jim...I like the song  ..a nice strong lead guitar would rock the song  


Ralph