| Dissapear |    |
Dissapear, one of my more recent songs. Made entirely in FL studio. I plan on making a live version with my band soon.
I made this song when I was rather angry, and although the lyrics dont generally mean anything, I tried to make it vaugely antiwar.
I made this song when I was rather angry, and although the lyrics dont generally mean anything, I tried to make it vaugely antiwar.
definately the first time I've heard this "angry" stile vocals from you, I love it! Perfectly fits in with the song.
The guitars could stand to be a bit more realistic, and the phaser at the beginning is quite extreme (gives me a bit of an earache) but other than that this song is awesome.
Can't wait for you to post some more.
Well it's late I'm going to bed. G'night all.
The guitars could stand to be a bit more realistic, and the phaser at the beginning is quite extreme (gives me a bit of an earache) but other than that this song is awesome.
Can't wait for you to post some more.
Well it's late I'm going to bed. G'night all.
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Welcome to the amp OtherGuy. I really like your song...the vox and melody line is great, and I like your lyrics. Imo the levels seem to be a little off in places, and I think there is something missing in this (though I'm not sure what - my ear just wanted to experience something bigger around 2:43, like an explosion of sound or something).
Good song, good job!
Good song, good job!
Impressive use of Fruity - very good stuff.
The mix is slightly off for me in this one - the vocals are too cutting (probably deliberate), but also too up front in the mix. One or the other would do for me.
That said, I love the vocal delivery.
I think I get what Spoon says about there being something missing - a background ......... something (!) to fill out the slightly empty feel - but actually I think it may be that everything's there that needs to be, but you need to re-mix it in order to bring out the best of everything.
Great idea though, only slightly let down by the mixing.
The mix is slightly off for me in this one - the vocals are too cutting (probably deliberate), but also too up front in the mix. One or the other would do for me.
That said, I love the vocal delivery.
I think I get what Spoon says about there being something missing - a background ......... something (!) to fill out the slightly empty feel - but actually I think it may be that everything's there that needs to be, but you need to re-mix it in order to bring out the best of everything.
Great idea though, only slightly let down by the mixing.
| which band??? |
are you planing on doing this with shm? If you are we're going to have to a gigantic remix, you know we'll probably going to a major remix... i mean look at what happened to xenith, but I'm sure it'll be fun!
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