Love it!

You're voice is well awesome!
Your songs are always really well structured and thought out, which is something I just can't do.
I like the little 'doo do do' bit.
I'd be jelous...if I was the jelous type of course.

Do you do gigs n that?

what can i add except mentioning i love this song too

i do

great song... I would like to hear more of your voice and less guitar.

wow is right.....

loverly recording sound.

me?  I can't sing a lick.........you sing beautifully.  love the steely, strumming, new string sound too.

well done.  & yes drums would punch it up a bit......would add something to your crecendos.  (did i spell that right?)

everyone's a critic right?

never mind.......it is fabulous.

great!!!!!!!!   simple like that

This is a very refreshing song, like a breath of fresh air, keeps you interested all the way through. Love it.

keep it up

Nice!  mixed very well.  Vocals are clear and harmonies are nice.  This song has a nice feel to it. The chord progressions remind me of Lisa Loeb.  Jazzy kind of cool mellow sound.  Peppy.  The structure of the song is good too. I would like to see lyrics!  You're only 16!  Keep up the good work!

Very good. Not my style of music though.

here are the lyrics:

[verse]

Its not a case of right or wrong
gotta take the dosage strong
no more fighting for the answer
slowly getting faster

Its that feeling in your heart
when lovers grow apart
the piece missing from the puzzle
that's hidden in the past

[bridge]

It rings so true
That story's old to you
Through and through
You just love the view

[chorus]

It's alright
It's alright
For you
You're on the track
There's no looking back
No luggage on your shoulders
It's alright
Yeah it's alright
Babe it's you
now i dont want to hear you say
"I miss you"
Now you're gone

[verse 2]
Soaking through my skin
Try'na find it's way in
It just needs a path to follow
To try to stop me feeling hollow

It lays heavy on your heart
Like it has done from the start
No second chances coming
There's no reasoning the truth

[bridge chorus etc...]

nice composition,... love the string guitar,.. especially the chords in refr,..
i love the voice,..
this is my favourite,.. like it so much !!

keep up the great creation !!

Though it was professional and I am not doubting it was...This isn't extacly my kind of music and I wasn't 'feelin' it.  Though I don't know how much you can accept my comments I'm not the best artist in the world

"Though it was professional and I am not doubting it was.."

well thats nice to hear - it's not proffessional, just used home equiptment, but i try to make it sound as good as possible

What a really nice song,
Not my thing, but good just the same.
By the sounds of things your going a long way.

Like the lyrics.

I really loved the song.. and your oh so pure voice. Gotta listen again    and again and again and....