This would sound better if it had some drums, but let me know what you think!

listening as i type..........

    drums for this song would be so AWSOME even if it was a midi i think it would highly benifit this song, the chorus is well done as well highly awsome. maybe you should sing the rest of the song a bit louder than your are? the chorus seems to be louder than the rest of it.... but then maybe im just deff? any way i liked this as well

paper doll

nice chorus
very good
yeah the overall song is pretty good
liked the guitar part
and yeah give some effects on the voice
that would make it sound livelier

Sounds like Nirvana.. and the electric guitar sounds out of tune but that helps making it sound even more like Nirvana, dunno if that was the intention though.. Cool song, would be a blast if that chorus had already some bass and drums