This, is a another Instremental track of mine,  this one is kind of sad

I know u guys want vocals out of me, but im not a singer and never will be. but....... there is a guy who might be working with me on the vocals ^^

i like this one and vocals would make it a real tear jerker if you have some good lyrics makes me wanna cry and i didnt mind it being a bit shortter than i would have perfered it was still very nice so a cookie for you keep it up my friend

the paper girl

This is really good!  I can easily see it being the opening theme song of a TV show.  Keep up the good work.

this was good...
yes some vocals were needed
well but yeah it was good alright!!!

Ya alryt Jonna, I think this song is brilliant, It has something about it that makes it stand out keep up the good work.

Sharky 

Everything that needs to be said has been said.
A good sound, well recorded, lacking vocals................

Oh - and it's way too short again!!!

A standout tune, you are really getting to grips with this very quickly. I'm very impressed with your recent postings.

H

Nice work squire, reminds me a bit of that 80's song. Can't remember the title at moment but goes something like  ...hear on my own again ....it's a wonderful, wonderful world. la laaah

but yeah, a bit short...

    oh well, its good though.... 

            JimK

Yeah, this is a pleaseant sound...to short yep...but, That can be taken care of...vocals are needed ,yep..Lyrics also....you have someone who can do a vocal track...do you have lyrics to this song ?

Flyer

The melody/strings remind me of Amazing by Lonestar.

I enjoyed this song. As others have said, a bit too short.

But I'm probably in the minority, not every song has to have lyrics. It's quite possible to say what you want in song without words. That's where different instruments, unusual solo instrument work can speak out without words.

Keep up the good work!

Nothing like 20 /20 vision in hindsight.
Wow Carby made  it big in his stay on bandamp , this is now or perhaps then ////// an apple loop complete soundtrack bed  song in macs  garage band and soundtrack/final cut pro programs.

Hope he got paid well 4 it