#1July 12th, 2006 · 07:28 PM
12 threads / 12 songs
43 posts
United States of America
Just Live
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#2July 12th, 2006 · 08:38 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Pretty f'n good.I love from 2minutes until 2:56 at which point I'm let down from my journey.A beautiful mood was set by the female vox,then the snare up...........then just goes back to the same  as before.Personally I would insert a guitar solo instead of the vocals over the 2:56-3:14 mark.It would sound awesome if it followed the same melody as the vocals as well.I would take out from 3:20-3:50.I feel it makes the song drag on.Like I said though a pretty f'n good tune and it definitely took me for a ride.

80% now,95% if these changes were in place.Just my 2 cents.Great work.
#3July 13th, 2006 · 11:03 AM
12 threads / 12 songs
43 posts
United States of America
Thanks for the input, I think I going to try exactly that and repost it.  Dan
#4July 13th, 2006 · 01:39 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Just Live
love the drums
guitar sometimes a bit 2 upfront in the quiet bits
vocals clear as a whistle / male
female a bit lost in the mix

how u do drums?

song meanders a bit specially towards the end (after such a strong start)........... cant find a vocal hook to hang my hat on

got my vote

splash
the fish
#5July 13th, 2006 · 01:48 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: re: Just Live
The 'just live' line could be used instead of WHOAAGH WOA>>>>>>>> towards the end

and reinforce the song title?

The female vocal sounds great but .........................why?

listened to at least 10 times

positive feedbak i hope
splash
the fish
#6July 13th, 2006 · 04:51 PM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Overall - I think this is a great tune!

I do think the guitar sounds a little too muddy in places, especially the beginning, and perhaps is too loud in some places as well.

The vox are good, both the male and female, but I think they get overpowered by everything else most of the time.  And I think those drums rock!!

I like the fact that this meanders...it makes it seem like a wicked jam tune!  Good work!!
#7July 13th, 2006 · 06:38 PM
7 threads / 7 songs
37 posts
United States of America
This is really good.  Like Fish and Spoon said, if it was cleaned up a bit, it would definately rock, but I really like the song.  Good job!
#8July 20th, 2006 · 11:39 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
The drums are superb!
The song itself is pretty damn good too, certainly in terms of construction.
The playing's tight - very nice
The vocals are good
There's just something "hollow" sounding in the mix - I'm not sure exactly what it is.

I like this song a lot - but it does need some remixing to be a really excellent track

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