This song was actually written by my Old Band A few years ago. but i have edited it. and recreated it from scratch. have a buddy help me out with the Drums.. hope you like it ^^

This sounds like the start of something good The drums are great, and the guitar is well played and consistent, and I really like the midi keys in there!

I think this type of music really needs lyrics/vox to round it out...will you be adding those?  And I would also like this to be longer!!

it's really short, but a well nice construction.

Drums are really well mixed, the guitar could be more up in the mix, though overall, it blends in nicely.

And I agree with spoon: vocals required for music like this! Anyway, for a showcase of what you're up to, not quite bad at all!

Yeh im actually working on vocals atm, Im just not a really good singer :P. but i am trying hard to get things up to shape

I thought I was listening to Jimmy Eat World,not bad at all.

Sounds like the start of something real good...I look forward to hearing it with some lyrics.

This kiks of and along well.
Yeah look forward to some vox soon .
great work on drum mix

I can help with Vocals jonna,song needs lengthening few more chorus's and verses and a middle 8

overall good performance
 

Another good recording, well thought out, and well played bit of music - that just gets you interested when it stops!
Vocals and length needed on this one!

Hi Jonna.

A good stompin little tune, guitar well played and the drums are great. keep up the good work