Hiya This is my First Song on here so hope you like it.. its not very long though :P. it is a typical Bluesy one

not bad at all.

guitar playing was good.

drums sounded great. did you record them? or did you use loops.. samples.. etc?

the mix could use some tweaking. for example, guitar (and maybe bass) down just a bit.

the only problem I could hear was with the bass. it sounded like it was played in a different key from the guitar.

but keep em coming...

listening as i type.........

    farley good and taka has some nice pointers i would agree with

        guitar playing was awsome

            i think there could have beena bit more "wow" to it
       
        maybe you should think about expanding this peace and making it

    bigger and badder and with more "wow" to it

        other htan that it was a pritty niffty little piece that has great potentail!

add some vocals and great lyrics (even if they are simmple)

            and you could have a nice little hit


welcome to band amp my friend we're glad to have you here!

thanks for you pointers. yeah i hope o work on it . like i said it was my first recording. i recorded segments of drums and then looped then. was quite tricky.. yeh i nticed myself tht the bass was a little out of key to the Guitar.. but im working on improving it. thanks again ^^

great guitar work we have here
and yeah the bass is really out of key!!!
well doesnt matter