Hello!

This is my old song, which I re-recorded before couple days, add some new things...

Everybody of us, when is born, must make a 1st step, some earlier, some later, and this song is about that step...

Please Comments, critics and suggestions are welcome.

Greeting, and continue making music!

Hey, I lost interest after the first  minute.......let me explain before you call me those names! LMAO   I feel at the one minute mark it begins it becomes 2 songs.The lead and then the rest,I was bopping along to it and then to me I feel the lead is on another planet of its own.I'm going to finish listening to the whole thing now just wanted to post right away.


Ok I just listened  and It's the second lead that  comes in.I couldn't hear the lead  the last time because of the other lead that enters,thats the one thats on another planet.Did you add that to the old recording?

This needs serious work there is not much else to say.

Rating:3/5
Vocals:N/A
Lyrics:N/A
Style:2/5
Instruments:4/5

this is not bad.

the orchestral hit, in my opinion, is not adding anything.. might even be taking away...

guitar playing is great. the effects used work good.

the only other problem (imo) is that it does get a bit monotonous.

mix sounds fine.

I respect your critics, and I think now of this "two lead". To me in song there is no two lead,obviously is evidence what is the main lead,  but this second guitar "lead" i put/add in song to stuff the song just a little.

Maybe if I appease second "lead", that 1st lead come in expression???

This is my song, my (old)work, but,hey,  taste are different! 

I would try to solve some stuff in song, and i must say just once, I respect your critics, and suggestions.

Greeting!