#1July 9th, 2006 · 09:46 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
122 posts
United States of America
Smokin
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This song is not in a battle


Here's my try at techno
Hope it's ok....

-NT4M

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#2July 9th, 2006 · 11:40 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
OH YAY IM THE FIRST TO COMMENT!
i loved it. plain and simmple. you did every thing a good techno song has, and it made me bounce around in my seat alot and now it's stuch in my head....... not sure if thats a good or a bad thing yet....... but yes 100 percent for this you did a wonderfull job

the paper doll
#3July 10th, 2006 · 02:07 AM
23 threads / 20 songs
235 posts
Canada
Nice techno, but techno 's about the beat and it's gotta be smooth, there's a little glitch in 0:07 but then the beat continued and I was ready ya!  Nice!
#4July 10th, 2006 · 11:54 AM
34 threads / 17 songs
581 posts
Canada
Good techno try!    I think to round it out you might try adding a really full bass sound - maybe come to a full second stop around :50 -  right after the "are you ready" - and come back in with full bass...and keep building it up in increments from there (like maybe adding more layers of drum loops, and some synth).  Imo, the best techno songs are about the build, the ebbs, and flows...you make the listener/dancer anticipate the changes, and almost beg for them - then you give it to them!

You've got a pretty good foundation here. I vote. 
#5July 10th, 2006 · 05:34 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
wow this is pretty funky!

kickin techno alright!

though a fat bassline or some arpeggiated synths would greatly add to the experience, this IS really cool!

wowow, impressed! I never found my way with FL Studio myself... but hey.. I feel more inspired now..

kool!


*applauds*



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#6July 10th, 2006 · 09:16 PM
31 threads / 20 songs
96 posts
Canada
This song needs better mixing and more progress. Most electronic music constantly changes providing excitement for the dancer. Try to think of it as a story, start from the Intro, into Plot line, move into Climax, and slowly back down. Sometimes with a false ending, use your imagination. Also All electronic songs need GOOOD STRONG basslines, so enjoy.
#7July 10th, 2006 · 11:14 PM
34 threads / 16 songs
538 posts
Mexico
Nice drum loops....love the use of the voice.

But it really needs some basslines, I think.
#8July 12th, 2006 · 12:58 AM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
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#9July 14th, 2006 · 10:30 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
madness a la Linda
u guys make me spin
fruity loops gone mad........... a la linda
love it ........................... jumpin around
i'm a casualty of fl sounds
thanx Linda

the fish
#10July 20th, 2006 · 10:34 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
"Smokin' is ba-a-a-a-ad for you"

Nice one NT4M - I've not tried the techno stuff yet but I'd be really pleased if, when I did, it turned out like this.
Yes, an electro-bass sound in there would have added to it nicely.  But this is great stuff Linda.
#11July 31st, 2006 · 12:16 AM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
Siren wrote…
Nice techno, but techno 's about the beat and it's gotta be smooth, there's a little glitch in 0:07 but then the beat continued and I was ready ya!  Nice!

 Actually the "glitch" is on ppurpose... it is meant to be there... it is what is called a fakeout...  your groovin, and then stop, then go... it is early on so that it freaks you out.. comes back again later in the song,

            Jim K
#12April 8th, 2007 · 05:31 PM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
HEY!!!
I am smokin... as I listen to this one... awesome production too!
#13April 8th, 2007 · 05:42 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Niceeeeeeeeeeeeee
WTG

has anyone seen My Lighter

Damn good recording
I Like

Will Rate
#14September 26th, 2007 · 11:31 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
12 posts
United States of America
smokin
i don't dig techno, and happen to like smoking, but nonetheless i still give it  3 stars it's sci-fiish and my wife digs sci- fi so it has to be good.
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