Let me know what you think.

Not a bad tune.Sounds like Only God Knows Why.Only thing I suggest is maybe play the full chords when you sing.The power chords get kind of boring and very repetitive and takes away from the vocals.

nice song  Dark...Nice flow...and the mix is perfect...I like the song 

Ralph

Kinda mimalist (in the sense there's not much to it) but I like that sort of stuff so....
Needs a bit more direction though. Take the song somewhere so that it progresses.
Even if it just changes at 3:38 to some guitar and keyboard harmonies or something. Just    to finnish it off.

u post the lyrics please
well the song is nice to sing
yeah i can imagine the video also
a boy walking on the street and singing the song!!!!
well great song!!!!
loved it

Here is the lyrics:

Awakened

A terrible feeling is coming over me
I feel desserted in this life that I see
How am I supposed to survive in this life

Chorus:
I am awakened
To the reality at hand
I just want to cry
It's all a lie

I have now lost what is made up of who I am
Because of what I was taught in his name
Now all alone I must find a way to get by

Even though this was forced upon me
I will make it because now its up to me
My eyes are open to the truth in this life

at first it did sound a little like only god knows why . this is not bad for ac guitar, keys and vox . the vox seem to lack a little emotion kinda droney( is that a word?lol). oh well good job.

This sounds good, the sound is clear but it gets a bit repetitive for my taste. Anyway, I like this spacey kind of sound;)

I agree with Jussi - it's well recorded, but it does get too repetitive.  Perhaps some other instrumental sounds, and drums, would pick the song up a bit.

I love the chords, basic but beautiful. Keep going with it though this song has endless possibilities

I would like to thank everyone for their comments.  It helps me to fix the things that need a little work and let me know what I am doing right so that I know what I should continue to do.