#1July 5th, 2006 · 11:49 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
12 posts
United States of America

This song is not in a battle

first recording song ever, i re recorded, and sent it off to get mixed, i will put the better sounding one up when its done.

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#2July 6th, 2006 · 12:59 AM
23 threads / 20 songs
235 posts
better sounding!
very clear! the recording is pretty good and the levels are mixed well too!!! Cool song over all!!!
#3July 6th, 2006 · 01:01 AM
23 threads / 20 songs
235 posts
Maybe try a ...
Maybe for the vocals try a pop screen or a gate of some sort!!!???   
#4July 6th, 2006 · 07:17 AM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
This is definitely better than the other one....  Much clearer....

   Better levels... yes....  Not too bad sounding either....  REminds me of the late 80's early 90's brit punk stuff.... But I like it.... 

          If you don't have a pop screen, you can make one, or you can try to eq it to getrid of the anomalies in the vocals, but they really aren't too bad...

     Anyway,  it would also be nice if you posted the lyrics.. and a bit about the band...


            Jim K
#5July 6th, 2006 · 11:41 AM
22 threads / 22 songs
64 posts
United States of America
I dig, I get the whole blonde thing. Cool =)

#6July 6th, 2006 · 12:02 PM
9 threads / 4 songs
209 posts
this is groovy
nice work!!!
#7July 6th, 2006 · 12:53 PM
24 threads / 9 songs
284 posts

great song, i liked the progression and the voice
#8July 6th, 2006 · 02:29 PM
92 threads / 12 songs
906 posts
United States of America
Despite imperfections, I think this song is pretty cool. Has nice "hook" and good overall construction. The song has some nice, imaginative features, like the descending break at 1:25...which provides some tension, and the listener is wondering if the song is ending (and possibly raising up to the edge of his/her seat)....then it cranks back in with the very pleasing "marching" rhythm that carries the song, which proceeds to the end. Thus, the listener gets to sit back, relax, and groove some more... This kind of feature provides dynamics and keeps the listener engaged (pretty professional quality to that element of the song!) The recording is pretty raw (could use some more polish in mixing....musicianship, equalization, etc., but then again..."the rawness" provides some charm). I think this could be a radio-friendly song. I must confess that part of the charm is the youthful quality to the singer's voice. Is this singer a male or female? and if so, how old?  (just curious). It's fun to imagine this is a young kid belting out this stuff! Overall, I think this song has great potential!
#9July 6th, 2006 · 03:24 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Our house,in the middle of the street,our house.
#10July 6th, 2006 · 03:55 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
BasketCase wrote…
Our house,in the middle of the street,our house.

mwhahaha... yeah!!!

but hey the song really sounds noice.. raelly noice...

as for vox.. compression and equalisation... and a plop killer maybe... that's not even what springs to mind first

anyway, keep em coming, I like em

#11July 7th, 2006 · 12:23 PM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
oooh very nice.

great song.

drums and guitars sound great!

vox have feeling.

mhmm... vox need some tech work...

anyway.. this one goes to my playlist.
#12July 9th, 2006 · 11:14 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
im addictedf to this song but i must confess it is not only because of the cute voice but because I CAN NOT understand a word this person is singing! im sorry but there are only a few lines i can under stand so ever time i listen i try to depict them..... it would be an awsome song if only i could understand what the vocals are.... but other than that i love it
#13July 16th, 2006 · 06:32 PM
160 threads / 33 songs
1,965 posts
United States of America
very raw but good
I love the rawness of this song . It's not overproduced and has a real edge to it.
It could use some help but IMO I wouldn't try to fix to much (might take away the charm).
Good job, love the solid beat to this song.
#14July 16th, 2006 · 06:48 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Shine
ok u record as live band....................
as live this recording very good
vocals clear nice song 2 the point
needs 2 go 2 studio 2 enrich sounds

u have my vote .............I like


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