| Shine |    |
first recording song ever, i re recorded, and sent it off to get mixed, i will put the better sounding one up when its done.
| hmmmmm |
This is definitely better than the other one.... Much clearer....
Better levels... yes.... Not too bad sounding either.... REminds me of the late 80's early 90's brit punk stuff.... But I like it....
If you don't have a pop screen, you can make one, or you can try to eq it to getrid of the anomalies in the vocals, but they really aren't too bad...
Anyway, it would also be nice if you posted the lyrics.. and a bit about the band...
Jim K
Better levels... yes.... Not too bad sounding either.... REminds me of the late 80's early 90's brit punk stuff.... But I like it....
If you don't have a pop screen, you can make one, or you can try to eq it to getrid of the anomalies in the vocals, but they really aren't too bad...
Anyway, it would also be nice if you posted the lyrics.. and a bit about the band...
Jim K
Despite imperfections, I think this song is pretty cool. Has nice "hook" and good overall construction. The song has some nice, imaginative features, like the descending break at 1:25...which provides some tension, and the listener is wondering if the song is ending (and possibly raising up to the edge of his/her seat)....then it cranks back in with the very pleasing "marching" rhythm that carries the song, which proceeds to the end. Thus, the listener gets to sit back, relax, and groove some more... This kind of feature provides dynamics and keeps the listener engaged (pretty professional quality to that element of the song!) The recording is pretty raw (could use some more polish in mixing....musicianship, equalization, etc., but then again..."the rawness" provides some charm). I think this could be a radio-friendly song. I must confess that part of the charm is the youthful quality to the singer's voice. Is this singer a male or female? and if so, how old? (just curious). It's fun to imagine this is a young kid belting out this stuff! Overall, I think this song has great potential!
Our house,in the middle of the street,our house.
BasketCase wrote…
Our house,in the middle of the street,our house.
mwhahaha... yeah!!!
but hey the song really sounds noice.. raelly noice...
as for vox.. compression and equalisation... and a plop killer maybe... that's not even what springs to mind first
anyway, keep em coming, I like em
oooh very nice.
great song.
drums and guitars sound great!
vox have feeling.
mhmm... vox need some tech work...
anyway.. this one goes to my playlist.
great song.
drums and guitars sound great!
vox have feeling.
mhmm... vox need some tech work...
anyway.. this one goes to my playlist.
im addictedf to this song but i must confess it is not only because of the cute voice but because I CAN NOT understand a word this person is singing! im sorry but there are only a few lines i can under stand so ever time i listen i try to depict them..... it would be an awsome song if only i could understand what the vocals are.... but other than that i love it 
| very raw but good |
I love the rawness of this song . It's not overproduced and has a real edge to it.
It could use some help but IMO I wouldn't try to fix to much (might take away the charm).
Good job, love the solid beat to this song.
It could use some help but IMO I wouldn't try to fix to much (might take away the charm).
Good job, love the solid beat to this song.
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