Ha, its very short and simple as it originated from me singing in the shower... just a drum sample, a bassline and me! All done in one take, appart from the 'Stop!' bit at the end. May add some more at a later date, but I've got this other song in the making called 'Sinking Heart' and the vocals are nearly all done on that one.

Lyrics:

I'm an empty vessel, I've given it all away.
I've talked to much and now I got nothing to say.
No hidden depths, no secrets left,
I'm just an empty shell,
So I'ma sit here and drink my beer, and then I'm gonna give you hell...
Gonna give you hell oh
Gonna give you hell...
Gonna give you hell ooh oh.
Just because you make me nervous,
It doesn't mean I'm scared of you.
Just because I keep my pants on,
It doesn't mean I don't need to screw.
You shouldn't have kissed me back boy,
You shouldn't have kissed me back boy,
You shouldn't have kissed me back boy,
You shouldn't have kissed me back, (so) STOP!

I really like this. The vocal phrasing and 'boxing' of the vocals really work. I think you may be able to build a cult following amongst broken hearts from this, if you don't have one already. Makes me remember and hate those times...

And part 2?

Jeff

you remind me of the yeah yeah yeahs..really good..something i would expect from you

Cool thing girl.... I like your lyrics
The music is very sharp in the high frequencies and clipping sometimes. But again a wonderful idea

a like this really, in it's simplicity, and I like the way it ends so suddenly.

I don't think this needs much more... A weird pad-like sound in the background to spice up the overall sound, especially in the beginning (it sounds a little bare as you know) will do a lot.

vocal effect really well chosen for this. nice one!

What puppet said - with a little moan about the clipping.

VERY cool in-fill track; a little Pink-ish to my ears  (someone I rate extremely highly)