hmmm...
Not too bad.... Kind of like THird Eye Blind meets Adam Sandler.... hehehe...
seriously though.... Compostion of the song is decent... get's a little monotonous in parts, but that seems to be part of the point, so kudos.... as for the vocals, well, not exactly the strongest point... but I can't carry a tune in a dump truck so who am I to critisize. The recording quality isn't too bad, but there are a few times that there is some major distortion... definitely NOT cool... but, you'll work those little bugs out in time, my guess is you have some serious compression issues.. try a bit less compression, and level out the track volume by eq'ing it, instead of cranking the gain on the lower tracks... :-)
Anyway... I guess what I am saying is, Like the track, these issues are minor... WEll done! Looking foward to more...
Jim K
p.s. Welcome to Bandamp!
Not too bad.... Kind of like THird Eye Blind meets Adam Sandler.... hehehe...
seriously though.... Compostion of the song is decent... get's a little monotonous in parts, but that seems to be part of the point, so kudos.... as for the vocals, well, not exactly the strongest point... but I can't carry a tune in a dump truck so who am I to critisize. The recording quality isn't too bad, but there are a few times that there is some major distortion... definitely NOT cool... but, you'll work those little bugs out in time, my guess is you have some serious compression issues.. try a bit less compression, and level out the track volume by eq'ing it, instead of cranking the gain on the lower tracks... :-)
Anyway... I guess what I am saying is, Like the track, these issues are minor... WEll done! Looking foward to more...
Jim K
p.s. Welcome to Bandamp!
drum changes |
chorus should double time on the drums or something because it would break it up.
as far as subject matter goes, ...if a person really , truely wants to kill 'em selves, they will and nobody could stop 'em!
as far as subject matter goes, ...if a person really , truely wants to kill 'em selves, they will and nobody could stop 'em!

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