This is a popular style on the radio at the moment...reminds me of GreenDay and Sum41.
I think your levels need to be a bit more balanced - the vox sometimes get lost behind the guitar...and I hear the vox go off a fair amount - but sometimes that doesn't matter much with this style.
I think the song is pretty good...keep working on it!
I think your levels need to be a bit more balanced - the vox sometimes get lost behind the guitar...and I hear the vox go off a fair amount - but sometimes that doesn't matter much with this style.
I think the song is pretty good...keep working on it!
Simple - pretty good, but a little repetitive.
I like the way it builds up with guitar, vox, bass, then drums.
It could do with a bit of reverb on the vocals, and some remixing I think.
While the structure is ok, it would be nice to have a break of some sort from the basic guitar riff.
But it's not bad
I like the way it builds up with guitar, vox, bass, then drums.
It could do with a bit of reverb on the vocals, and some remixing I think.
While the structure is ok, it would be nice to have a break of some sort from the basic guitar riff.
But it's not bad
I agree with spoon the vocals are off but that can work with the style
I think you are focusing on the vocals I think you should balance the song so that the vocals aren't the central point of the song
otherwise good song and I know exactly where you are comin from
I think you are focusing on the vocals I think you should balance the song so that the vocals aren't the central point of the song
otherwise good song and I know exactly where you are comin from
| Honestly |
The only thing I can say I like about this is that its well recorded. I am really not a fan of what gets played on the radio these days unless it is an oldies station. I guess I was born 20 years to early, but the guitar lines and everything are well recorded. Good job there!
| not bad just fix a few levels |
I'd adjust a few levels work with the eq on a few things . To me it's a little repetitive
maybe change up the drums alittle more and change up the guitar a little more for some variation( that's just an opinion ). You might work on your vocals try to tighten them up a
little but in this style of music it fits. pretty good song overall though.
maybe change up the drums alittle more and change up the guitar a little more for some variation( that's just an opinion ). You might work on your vocals try to tighten them up a
little but in this style of music it fits. pretty good song overall though.
I love the vocal delivery,very I dont give fuck I have the mic and your going to listen to every word I say.Yes this deserves a better recording and some changes but it has a strong foundation to build on.Good job!
| that wasent too hot |
yeah i agree with the first guy, that styl sucks, i mean for yall to someone who listens to that may like it, but im stuck in the nineties!
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