This is my first attempt at my own song......

      I did it ALL, Jim helped a little, but I played Guitar(I don't know how though)....  Jim helped with the effects stuff, mixing, etc.....

  So don't yell at me if it hurts your ears... It's all HIS fault.. hahahahahahhaha  But I hope you enjoy it...

Surprise after the song...  if your patient...

 -NT4M

What a gorgeous voice you have.

ok the guitar is a bit out of tune and out of sync but all in all nice

wow, the freakish intro which is later repeated is really... freakish!

the tune itself is sweet in a way, but also very raw because of the production and the out of tune/out of sync-ness here n there... but the true spirit of rock music is apparent in it's entirety....

so, I gather this is one... Rock and Roll Rarity, right?

good job! keep workin on your style, the ideas are really great!

I can hear those voices....................
man u might be mad

luv u linda

overall the song sounds good, but the structure could use some work. try to get the vocals and guitar in sync, and tune the guitar, please.

I think it's lovely just the way it is...

OOOOOooooooh!


      I really like it..... Very nice....   What a sexy, sultry voice you have??

            Drivin me crazy...   Yeah, baby.....

                   SMooches

                           Jim K

ahhhhh yes

oh very good. the occasional distortion on the vox adds to the craziness.

haha, wonderful!

what a talented family.

Crazy stuff indeed!

Wow - at 50 seconds, you show what an amazing vocal range you have!!!

This is fun stuff, an enjoyable listen.

Thanks for the GREAT posts & comments & info!
The guitar does sound out of tune...but it was in tune...that's how I played it!
I CAN'T PLAY! Laugh....SERIOUSLY!  It was all in fun & I had fun doing it!

I love the posts! Keep them coming....I am working on another song
but there is no music! Hahhaha....sounds kinda KrAzY  huh?


-NT4M

This really sounds as if some crazy were singing it; you know, makes me feel as if you were crazy, and if that's what you wanted to achieve, well, you did.
I think all those sounds and saturation gives more ambiance to the song, so I shouldn't change them.
Good crazy job.

          > Iszil

To be honest with you Linda, between 0:08 - 0:14 it actually sounds as if this was a proffessionally written song! All in all, a krazy tune!

HAHA! the whisper thing is GREEEEAAAAT... haha.. made me simile for the first time in about a week or so.

Keep them coming, Linda. Should you need any help, I'm at your service.
To quote, I'll give that a 80% rating.
Love,
Jim

cool NT4M..I like off the wall stuff..and I stuck around till the end   glad I did ...I like that lil  sexy whisper at the end      


Ralph

hahaa.

bonkers.

i like.

seriously reminds me of the time I spent in the Parthenon... the tn. state mental facility in Nashville... looks like doctors would just simply look at a person's medical levels before trying to have someone committed.. my electrolytes, potassiumn, tri-glycerides and insulin levels were so outta wack, he was the one that shudda been committed... oh well, I enjoyed the rest and was out in two days... even the head psyc. there said he needed to be examined for even sending me!! the inital report said I was a "little" combative..  I shudda whipped his ass the next time I saw him.. but held myself to prove to that jerk he was the one that needed help!!

blessings,