My head hurts... sleepy...argh

Really great work PDoll....I would love to hear some vox on this...

nice! Like this track ...verry porcelain..style....Im waiting to see you in the charts..

yeah would really be nice with some vocals..

but the mix in itself full!!!!

Hello. I believe you have an interestening way to compose...you harmony realy gets very acurate sintonism beyond melody, rhythm and colours.
JR

Extraterrestial ambiance - interesting rhythm set - great use of synth sounds - almost sounds orchestrated - u k i k a z

The crisp noise is catchy and makes the song origin.
Like the tender rhythms
Good work (again)

grainy groove mmmm and  ambience texture  rich ,like the toms  2.40 too.
 
Chill out ministry of sound mix tasty.
very good.

thankyou!!!
thought i better add something of a description...
i've been adding to this for months a tiny bit at a time, and i was pleased at how it turned out. it did have lyrics but as the song built up, the lyrics don't go anymore so i'll have to write some new ones!
i actually played this for my dad, cause he wanted me to compose some 'plinkety plonkety' on hold music for his new phone system (hes a courier control thingy guy, i call him the fat controller haha) and he said he really liked it! he's not the sort of dad that would say he really liked something i did unless he really meant it, so that makes me feel kinda good 
I dunno if I've already asked this somewhere else, but does anyone know how to make the wimpy player thing play through USB headphones? my speakers have walked off and i need to listen to all the stuff i've missed!
I love you people! I need to pay more attention to you guys!
Farewell x x x x

Nice bit of work PD - as I'm about your dad's age, then it appeals to me too!!!

I really, really want to hear your voice on this - it's crying out for vocals, so get writing kiddo!

The music itself builds up very well - bringing the drums up in the mix at 2:30 (ish) is a really great move.  You sure know how to get the best out of that software!  You should give lessons!

My only criticism of the track in it's current form is that, without vocals, it is a bit too long - I need it to change somewhere along the line; probably before the 3 minute mark. 

Apart from that, it's great

Hey where am I. I must have fallen asleep. I like this very much. A lovely relaxing tune.

is doll still watchin the amp .....

we miss you....

fish

You know this is very beautifully arranged. I almost wish there were lyrics, but I think I can agree with everyone else, that there doesn't really need to be any lyrics.  This reminds me of NIN and Throbbing Gristle with a light touch of GodFlesh.  I really can say that i feel the song as it is playing. i would say maybe put some lyrics to it to grab my attention further, but I am biased in that area.

This is a really brilliant song! I love the lulling nature to it...

I may be in the minority here, but I actually really like the song with no vocal part. It's a great song to add to "Time to study" playlist.

Nice track, PD..Your Vocals would be great added on to this. To be honest, I like it as it is. All instumental.

Nice rating