The lyrics pretty are straight forward, at least in the beginning. It's a bit melancholy for days gone by, and friends that have come and gone but wish they have stayed...Let me know what ya think

Another nice one by you.  Your vocals sound a little strained compared to the other one of yours I've listened to...(but I did read your post about your throat complaints so that may explain it )  But the more I listen to it..the more the strain starts to sound like earnest emotion (I really do like the tone and expression of your voice)  Your vox levels seem to be all over the place too...what are you mixing with?  Compression on the mic could help with that.

I identify with the theme...I pine for old pals too!

As for the guitar is out of tune and your voice too its a real nice tune. Guess that this was recorded with only one mic live? Idea is good and the composing is good also. But like spoon said, you should work on your mixing and a bit on your vocal performance. And you got my points for doing this so pretty.

nice song cheers!!
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A really good song, let down only by the recording (and a little by the out of tune guitar too!)

I like the vocals - dynamics and expression are excellent; there's real feeling in this song.
I like the guitar playing  - again loads of passion in there, which is good in my books (oh alright, so there are a few "duff" notes, but no matter)
I like the song