Just acoustic - spanish sounding

no offense but ur guitar sounds a bit out of tune other than that the overall feel is pretty good

You have some good ideas, maybe you could try to spend more time recording it. You, mnow, whitout mistakes. When I record, I want to do it the best I can and sometimes it takes hours to record single solo. I like that rhythm guitar, nice groove. Ya, maybe out of tune a bit on some parts but like I said, try to improve it a bit. Keep rockin' and good luck!

I can imagine this as the opening to a heavy metal song (like Metallica's Fight Fire With Fire or Shadows Fall's The Light that Blinds). It doesn't seem like it will stand on its own incredibly well, though.

Bring back memories of recording with out thinking to tune the guitar to 440 before recording. You got a good ideal and the song sounds good. Just tune up the same all of the time or when you go back to re-record you'll never get it in tune.
Keep the music going and play it with style...

The metal feeling is everywhere on this, even without any distortion. If it's a home recording it's a pity that you don't repeat the parts you mistake because your ideas are great and the melody too.

the first part reminds me of seasons in the abyss ..

A read one of your posts where you said you sucked, I have to disagree with you.  As the others have said you have some great ideas here, now you just have to go back polish them up some.  Good job.