deferred3 |
cleared up the vocals a little but haven't done anything else. d.
writing as I listen....the vocals sound pretty good, almost chanting-monk-like, and I like the layering.
That synth loop (is that what it is?)that goes all the way through the whole song needs some variation...I start to find its repetition distracting.
Other than that, I think this is good, oh, and I like the ending.
That synth loop (is that what it is?)that goes all the way through the whole song needs some variation...I start to find its repetition distracting.
Other than that, I think this is good, oh, and I like the ending.
Kept expecting some driving rythm to kick in at some point. quite hypnotic on prescription painkillers tho!
I think it's a great track still - though I would definately like some drums coming in (or just a very heavy slowly pounding percussion) after the first verse. and then perhaps, more building up with pad synths in the background or so
anyway I like the feel of this song, so I download it,
ps. "crushed by the weight of being crushed" makes perfect sense to me... I don't wanna explain though, but it's something to with a chain reaction, a spiral down, when undergoing hard times.
anyway I like the feel of this song, so I download it,
ps. "crushed by the weight of being crushed" makes perfect sense to me... I don't wanna explain though, but it's something to with a chain reaction, a spiral down, when undergoing hard times.
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