Well i like this song but i wish i could give u the finished version

writing as I listen...

ok, little scratchy, but you're just starting? not bad.

backup instruments sound like keyboard instruments, but actually aren't so bad. not my preference though.

ahhhh vox... ooh very nice voice. absolutely... yes

mmmm.. wish I could understand the lyrics.. but that's nobody's fault but mine...

ok. there are a few problems with quality and stuff, but it sounds like a nice song.

oh and... welcome

I'm guessing this is a "scratch" or rough draft,  so i won't comment on some of the imperfections. What I will say is this: I love your voice! Secondly, this song has a compelling quality to me and I am interested in hearing more!

There are some timming issues you have to work on, but instrumentation it's not bad. Didn't like much the keyboard type of instruments though... too plastic.

The song is pretty well put toghether, but I most say it didn't sound original to me, it seems you're still trying to find your own style... wich I understand,  cause I'm on the same journey.

Suerte!

again  i say your voice is beautiful and the recordings arent to well put together but i would like to hear a well reacorded version