this song has a lyrics too, but there weren't any ability to record it, so it's just a instrumental version.. btw drums are synthetic

I like this.  It sounds groovy, and up-front. I do think that real drums might be better for this sort of song.    You might want to watch your levels,  seemed to peek a bit.  I am so curious to hear what the vocal melody is.  Could you maybe post the lyrics at least?

nice song in a grunge style

reminds me Nirvana's Rape Me

anyway, i like it

i want to hear the vocal melody too!!

welcome to bandamp

Sir Axealot

Simple structure, with some pretty decent sounds in there. 
The clean drums sound slightly odd with the other over-driven bits - perhaps you could "dirty" them up a little!

Nice though, it's nice.
I'd like to hear the vocals on this one too - it would tie the whole tune together well.


Sir Riffsaplenty

this peace sounds cool man i also would like to hear some vocals or even just the chorus would be nice it has a nirvana style to  it nice

WELL I AM ALSO SCREAMING WHILE LISTENING MAN........

nice song really good..
just my style..