Ok, so i added an ending, made it abit longer and mixed it abit better... think it still needs some more changes but this will have to d til i get round to it

ah...the classic fade-out ending.  I think you took the easy route on that one! 

maybe you could try bringing it round back to the beginning guitar part with a dabbling of the ending you've got...just a suggestion    

Good work as usual D.

hey..i hear sound of tabla...well indian percussion instrument..

well quite nice used man,....

really good mix...''

the mix is really nice ....

Recording quality is good
Concept is also good - I like the build-up around a simple central musical theme.

It does end up sounding very messy to me from about 1:21, so I think that needs clearing up somehow.  Thinking about it, up to that point it's a really nice intro into, perhaps, a folksy acoustic number!  Just a thought

It'll be interesting to see where you take this one.