Yea.

Need to re-mix a bit...

    THe vocals are drowned a bit by the guitar, which is too loud, and too tinny...

        THe vocals need a bit of reverb and a touch of compression...  but otherwise, not too bad....

   the song is kind of fun, and kind of melancholy.. it's like your not saying what you really feel.. very good....   I like it...   Great lyrics....  Keep them coming...

        Jim K

This is nice...

I really like the song, nice and simple, lack of drums doesn't take away from it... nice...

Although... everything sounds really muddy. Still recording with the mic in another room?

Would you post the lyrics?

nice work.

Sounds like a lot of fun to play. Reminds me of elctronic Bob Dylan sorta. good and poetic.

Sounds like a great tune.  I like the guitar chords used, and the melody.  I can't really make out too many of the words, could you post them?  Your vox sound pretty decent too.

You already know that the mix needs work...but I think you have a good song to work with.

I look forward to hearing more from you

I like it....
I like the vocals..... I think they should be louder....

I like the tune to!

-NT4M