Hey, never quite sure what to post, the unprofessional stuff that I am doing now or the professionally produced stuff that I wrote but didn't have a chance to play on the final recording. This is one I did by myself. Next one will be another Once a Traitor song. Peace, d.
Here are the lyrics:
Heart Flower


With your promised faith though broken still

I know you will, I know you will

Apportion grace the scales to fill

Your justice's high demands fulfill

 

For an enemy to reconcile

With dirty hands and crooked smile

There's a waiver only blood can seal

The sentence paid the soul to heal

 

Blooms anew a flower from the flesh

Though wounds on hands and feet bleed fresh

To the fount from which redemption springs

New heirs unto the throne to bring

 

Theres a beauty not perceived or seen

Of bloody soul now spotless clean

Moves the judging hand to show the face

Of loving grace, amazing grace

 

Now the broken heart can sing

Now the children hail the king

Now the broken lift their arms and sing

Halleluiah

I think you're off beat with your singing and playingm but since you're doing it yourself I really can't say much. I like the chords, but I wish you could changed it up a bit more. The voice you have is awesome, but twice I think you cut yourself short of air or something. (Reconcile and springs)

Otherwise, learn to sync up a bit more, and I really like you're style.

vocals down a little and work in progress we will take it at that i like it has great promise i like it but eq it out a little look forward to hearing it again in the new improved