Hello people!!!

In the beginning it was simple rock song but in one day this thing became, i think, interesting song

Well, estimate it please.

I like this, but I think the effects on the guitars are a little too much.

I like 1:30

It's a nice song, but sounds more like you were just playing with the effects, than trying to create a song.

vocals would add a lot.

otherwise, nice song.

Thanks,
What about effects on the guitars I agree with you but i cfb't change it because i lost original sonds  wihout effects.
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What about vocal in original version this vocal sounds sometimes false so i decide make this instrumental song /

It's a nice song, but sounds more like you were just playing with the effects, than trying to create a song.

Don't listen to this foolish musician who mostlikely knows more about music than me. I think the soung rocks. I wish you had a version with your vocals though. It sounds good enough to kick a few bands on the warped tour in the nuts.

I like the name, It happens to be my favourite book by Kahlil Gibran!!! I like how the music pans back and forth at the beginning! It's actually a very good song, i like it!!! =)

its not bad some nice guitar sounds there, buty i agree with taka on this one... just kinda cycles thru different effects, and its amplifyed by the fact that they come in at random times... just out of the blue a different effect will come in... so yea nice song but ditch some of the effects

Not a bad composition - I like the sounds of the guitar, the playing is melodic and flowing.  But it doesn't really go anywhere.
It's a nice grounding for a song though.  Add vocals and drums, and it would be pretty cool.

Oh, nice quality recording by the way...... although it was a little heavy on the low frequencies for me (or maybe my sub's turned up too high!!!)

I like the chord progressions. I had my head phones on and the panning about made me dizzy.  I think this song would make a nice acoustic duet.  One guitar carrying the chords and bassline while the other does chords and leads(ala canon ie. Georg Phillip Telemann style ).Just my humble opinion only. good job though.

Cewl man.  reminds me of driving down a long country road.

It's good... I'd like to hear more of what you can do! 


-NT4M

Thank, baby! And... I would like to go on this long road with you!

i like were your going with the melodies but at times it sounds like the steel strings loses tune.  the phaser rate is too fast.  the volumes are a bit off on the changes. the tempos seem to run up and down.  I loved the 5 secs of vocals, but then it was gone.  Why not add those vocals through out the song?

Not bad still my friend =)

Dj randygroove
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There is some magic in this! Oh, just try to sing.. please! ) It would be a futher more magical.

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