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#1May 20th, 2006 · 06:48 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,952 posts
United States of America
goodbye
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This song is not in a battle


How about a power ballad
this song needs some more work
I got a little heavy on the vocal delay,
needs some layered keys.
Don't like the snare sound at all
drum mix is off some
would change the vocal harmonies, drop more vocal lines down below the lead vox.

Any way it's another songI wrote.
We recorded thru a yamaha 02R digital board into an old mac pc,with motu a/d converters and digital performer software.

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#2May 21st, 2006 · 12:03 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
sounds like you've got some real talent... in all aspects of your songs

and I'm falling in love with your lead vocalist...

as for critiques... I think the vocals sound a bit muffled.. I mean, the recording is clear, and they're definitely understandable... but it sounds like they could use some EQ work... maybe -mid +treble just a bit?

also, the vocals sounded really strong and emotional during the chorus.. but I don't think the guitars supported them enough...

those vocal harmonies are nice... though I'd agree, some harmonies below the lead would give it a more full sound

now.. these are all minor details. the song is really nice... and sounds great the way it is.
good work.
#3May 21st, 2006 · 06:49 AM
77 threads / 59 songs
919 posts
Netherlands
you have an awesome tone! really like the way you play
i'm through with this style of music , but you do convince again!

agree for the drum sound, bass is it a bit loud too(imo)

main critical point to me is the clean guitar part, it is very common isn't it? i mean , like we all started with a 'house of the Rising Sun' sort off picking, if i listen to the rest of your playing i think you could have come up with some more interesting picking

just mean to be helpfull with all respect
#4May 21st, 2006 · 07:42 AM
3 posts
United States of America
this is nice i like your song man you rock
#5May 21st, 2006 · 10:14 AM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Chile
This is a awesome tune! Love it!
Everything sounds pretty good. May be I should add a bit more - just a little bit- of reverb to the electric guitar.
The high-pitched voice in the chorus really kick ass. I love falsettos, so that's a great voice arrangement for me.
The song is great! I liked it a lot!

         > Iszil
#6May 21st, 2006 · 12:24 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,952 posts
United States of America
Thanks for your input
Yeah, I like the song. I just talked to the singer this morning. We are going to go back and redo this one and answers. We're not happy with the overall quality. I have already changed the way I play the clean on this song . We're bringin in some keys to smooth things up. Can't wait to start layin down new trax.
Again thanks for you input.
#7May 21st, 2006 · 02:42 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,795 posts
Germany
needs keys? ok piano and organ. nothing else.
#8May 21st, 2006 · 02:48 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,952 posts
United States of America
yeah  kinda what i was thinking maybe, a layerd organ/ string setting. Just an idea...
#9May 21st, 2006 · 05:52 PM
30 threads / 5 songs
757 posts
Australia
Go for it man ,this is pretty awsome.Supurb vox all around bvs too.

Bit of hammond & take the Deep Purple road?
#10May 22nd, 2006 · 10:00 AM
17 posts
United States of America
Very Good
I agree with the comment about the EQ work on the vocals - adding a little high frequency boost could make the vocals a little more crisp.

Other than that, I love it, oh man That guitar solo rox!
#11May 22nd, 2006 · 02:41 PM
117 threads / 54 songs
3,065 posts
Netherlands
It's nice to know this genre is being kept alive, your singer definately has the perfect voice for it.

I think you guys do a great job at it.

Well, since I don't have much to add, I will not always post to all your songs but trust me I listen to & download them all
#12May 22nd, 2006 · 03:12 PM
24 threads / 9 songs
284 posts
Mexico
great song man, I really like the style

got my vote,

I hope to hear more from you
#13May 22nd, 2006 · 08:04 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
22 posts
Chile
Very good, its a great song and sounds excellent
I like the song...
check OvO Alergy and Habea...
#14May 22nd, 2006 · 08:41 PM
8 threads / 8 songs
257 posts
Netherlands
I thought Nirvana has destroyed AL of this kind of music,....but its still alive and kicking.
Good job,..
#15May 23rd, 2006 · 09:51 PM
13 threads / 12 songs
149 posts
United States of America
cool ballad
great mix and recording-this one hits the spot-i dig rock ballads-ala SCORPIONS-great voice suits this style of rock.only knock is that it's too hair band era sounding,not a bad thing,just sounds dated.
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