track i made using vst instruments on cubasis

Nice that you are creating your own music.. It's not my style though.. and sounds a bit.. well.. empty..

Maybe put some more feeling in it or something, don't exactly know how to put it.

but well, keep practising

I like it, kind of edgy and dark enough to make the sesame street-ish keyboard melody sound ominous and really freakin cool. I would like to hear more of this stripped down sound and I guess I am a sucker for vocals

well, you have a weird style... cartoonish arcade computer type style... I think you'd do pretty well remixing those old c-64 tunes!

I do however think that this tune could use some more depth, more layers, maybe make it sound darker.. maybe some heavy guitar stabs in there or so... or else.. maybe a kinky femme voice doing a lamo dance-like chorus line in there that would be cool too!

well, the fact that it's completely midi will definitely bring its rating down...

otherwise, good use of the stereo... and it had some quite nice spots here and there, especially near the middle, and after.

when it first started, I was worried... but it picked itself up.

I think this would be an awesome song with real instruments.. or synths..