aliitle soul searchin we all do from time to time

Really touched me....

   Alot of emotion, comes through well.. 

      I love your vocal style...  It is raw, and real.... not alot of effects, and over dubbing... so what you hear is you... and that is great....   I've said it before, you have style man...

             Jim K

hmmm....opinions....


well, to be honest, i didn't like the vocals...at all.  in a song with just acoustic and vocals like this i personally think a little more needs to be happening from the vocals to keep it interesting.

just me.

thanks guys...but im gonna make something outa this 1 regard less!

you should, you got a voice with a history, i like that

the song could fit great in a movie where the lead character is at a loss, contemplating

it's really beautiful. your lyrics are great and I agree with max about your voice.

as-is right now it does require images (a video) or a good article/book to read to do it's magic, standalone it's making me long for either of those. but it's beatiful man, just beautiful.

I like the vocals - you have a nice a relaxed singing style (and I like Max's comment about the voice with a "history", hehe), and I feel it goes well with the guitar.

The recording needs some work for me, the guitar has a top end whistle, which may be in the compression to MP3 - but then you say you're going to make something out of this, which I assume means that you're going to re-record it, so it's no problem at all.

If I were to redo this, I still have the simple acoustic guitar and vocal, with harmonies introduced every now and then.  Additionally, I think perhaps a touch of light strings and a very subtle fret-less bass; drums would be minimalist.

Oh how I waffle on sometimes   Anyhow, this is a lovely well structured song.
I like it.

I liked it alot!
Your voice is really soft and I also like the sound of the guitar! Someone said that it would fit in a movie, and I think exactly the same!

Great work!

the whole movie thing keeps comin up.....
guess i try to paint apic with words and music ...a freind told me this was called
image trans something or other......we write what we know
 

Wow , this is the hardest thing to do and you did it. Great guitar playing clean a strong
Your singing is the best. Tone of your voice is appealing makes me want to listen to it.
This is better than most pro pop and rock bands/singers who do acoustic recordings.
I've now listened to it 4 times and I'm still not tired of hearing it again.
                                                                  Great job on this song
                                                                            Greg

WOW

Love this ...........
Your voice is great in this genre ......(again)
Must admit I waited and waited for the electric guitar to come ripping in ..........just cos i was listening to your other work in progress prior to this fantastic 'thinking' song.

Thanks for a relaxed few minnits

kersploosh
the fish

gotta wk on this 1

thanks again ...hope you ole timews aare learnin!