| Apologize |    |
Hi all,
Thought I'd put one of my "love songs" on bandamp. Enjoy!
Thought I'd put one of my "love songs" on bandamp. Enjoy!
Your band is so good.... so talented
You wrote this song very well, really like the lyrics and nice drum beat.
The chorus is really cool, especially because your voice is very good and USED very good in the chorus specifically
Clear recording and very beautiful sound...
I would have done the end differently.... the least i would do is stretch it out a bit more because i really liked this song and didn't want it to end THAT QUICKLY ... i know you faded it out but you could have easily sneaked in 2 or 3 more "why am i still trying's" in there and got no complaints (from me atleast).
Awesome work, awesome song, awesome band
You wrote this song very well, really like the lyrics and nice drum beat.
The chorus is really cool, especially because your voice is very good and USED very good in the chorus specifically
Clear recording and very beautiful sound...
I would have done the end differently.... the least i would do is stretch it out a bit more because i really liked this song and didn't want it to end THAT QUICKLY ... i know you faded it out but you could have easily sneaked in 2 or 3 more "why am i still trying's" in there and got no complaints (from me atleast).
Awesome work, awesome song, awesome band
Chill wrote…
Your band is so good.... so talented
You wrote this song very well, really like the lyrics and nice drum beat.
The chorus is really cool, especially because your voice is very good and USED very good in the chorus specifically
Clear recording and very beautiful sound...
I would have done the end differently.... the least i would do is stretch it out a bit more because i really liked this song and didn't want it to end THAT QUICKLY ... i know you faded it out but you could have easily sneaked in 2 or 3 more "why am i still trying's" in there and got no complaints (from me atleast).
Awesome work, awesome song, awesome band
Thanks Chill, good advice, I think it could go for a bit longer too, consider this version a radio edit! When my album is released it will have the extended version for sure.
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hey,
I really, really like the chorus!!!
the part "and why am i still trying" is so beautiful! The voices sound amazing together, so light, so easy. The guitar tune seems to be like a last sighing. Oh and I love the way how you "slide" into the apologize. Great!!!
I really, really like the chorus!!!
the part "and why am i still trying" is so beautiful! The voices sound amazing together, so light, so easy. The guitar tune seems to be like a last sighing. Oh and I love the way how you "slide" into the apologize. Great!!!
HeadphoneSilence wrote…
hey,
I really, really like the chorus!!!
the part "and why am i still trying" is so beautiful! The voices sound amazing together, so light, so easy. The guitar tune seems to be like a last sighing. Oh and I love the way how you "slide" into the apologize. Great!!!
Thank you! I am glad you like this song.
yes, a beautiful song indeed. a great sounding mix, and the vocal harmonies which are distinctively your style, are great too.
the sound, composition and entire feel of your songs keep giving me that same The Cure experience, which is probably one of the bigger compliments I can give....
so, keep doing your thing, it sounds great in my ears!
good luck!
the sound, composition and entire feel of your songs keep giving me that same The Cure experience, which is probably one of the bigger compliments I can give....
so, keep doing your thing, it sounds great in my ears!
good luck!
| It's always the same |
...and I don't mean that in any negative way.
I probably can't write something that could help you to improve, because I simply can't think of the slightest thing anyone else or I could to better.
So I hope it's OK. I just wanted to let you know that's a beautiful piece of work again
I probably can't write something that could help you to improve, because I simply can't think of the slightest thing anyone else or I could to better.
So I hope it's OK. I just wanted to let you know that's a beautiful piece of work again
Let it explode in the middle,..i perhaps don't understand this.
But anyway good luck to you all.
But anyway good luck to you all.
Very cool great groove,chorus is a definite winner.
Lovely texture in backing sensitve lyrics sung well,I don't know as formyself I didn't feel the need for explosion in the middle,comes down to personal taste I really like this song for what it is.excellent work
Lovely texture in backing sensitve lyrics sung well,I don't know as formyself I didn't feel the need for explosion in the middle,comes down to personal taste I really like this song for what it is.excellent work
blakhatz wrote…
Very cool great groove,chorus is a definite winner.
Lovely texture in backing sensitve lyrics sung well,I don't know as formyself I didn't feel the need for explosion in the middle,comes down to personal taste I really like this song for what it is.excellent work :D
Thanks, I think exploding in this song would probably not go well too. But the feedback from all at bandamp has been constructive. Thanks blakhatz, and all.
| Nice sound |
Sound of the guitar is nice, crisp and clear.
Voice is also good, clear.
A melodic instrument would have supported a bit the feeling of the song.
The mixing is fine. Nice to hear.
Keep on composing!
Voice is also good, clear.
A melodic instrument would have supported a bit the feeling of the song.
The mixing is fine. Nice to hear.
Keep on composing!
very good song. like the vocals good mix .
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