Couldn't fit the full title, it is called: The Silvery Tides of Donny Smeak.

It's just a short little number that I'm not sure what to think of. Its dirived from a trippy poem I wrote and then I just came up with some guitar and bass and drums for it and recorded it while the inspiration was fresh. Also just to give you the heads up, The vocals a mixed a tad low. I tried to fix it but I recorded the Vocals and Guitar at the same time so it was kinda tough. Just bear with it if you can. Anyway Give her a listen and let me know what you think.

noone?

Interesting melody you got there. For some reason it puts me in mind of Live. It's in need of a re-record of course (most songs on here are) but it's a fairly solid effort and I'd love to hear more stuff.

think you have the ground work layed down for a solid song here othercomrades. you're right about the vox/guitar mix, it was hard to hear what you were singing in parts. only suggestion i would make is to swap the bass for a violin or mandolin. hope to hear a re-recording of this one someday.

Not a bad suggetion from syntax .... or trusty cello .good melody ,drums slild a little in tempo ,but overall sweet.