this is my first track which i have used affects with (echo throughout the song) and its my second attempt at a song that i have written ,no lyrics though im afraid but i thought none where needed...please comment

If only you could present your ideas to your band members I am positive they could turn them into well-thought-over ideas.

I se this as a rough outline of an intro or a main theme to a richly orchestrated and lushly arranged song. This is screaming for 1) attention of someone who can develop the idea, 2) more instruments, like keyboard pads backing up the malody. However, I realise some of you might not agree on that.

And it does NOT need any lyrics IMO unless you really want them in it. 

Or u could go more pink floyd, and leave it as it is, only play it as skillfully as u can and back it up with drums at least.

   Liked it. this could also be played by lead guitar and not lose any of it's atmospheric mood.

Oh, and i really don't know how to rate it as I think you should have it rated as an idea only, not as a song yet.

So, ... no points for that yet.
BY the way - that's a adequate title to what the song sounds like. well done!
J

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