#1April 29th, 2006 · 01:50 PM
7 threads / 6 songs
21 posts
United States of America
If I'd Seen You First
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This song is not in a battle


This tune's about craving the forbidden fruit of a bandmates tree . . . not a good idea, nor rare in the music biz.

Hear are the words . . . Enjoy? 

If I'd seen you first, I'd made you mine,
cuz' I love you best, after all of this time.
When I see you walk in, not hand in hand,
oh I'd hold on tightly if I were that man.

I see him downtown, I search for your eyes,
but you'll never hear when he's spreadin' his lies,
and leaves with some girl, that I would touch,
oh, how I wish, babe, that that I'd seen you first.

If I'd seen you first, then you'd be my girl,
forever my lover, forever my world.
he'd not come along,  you'd not be his wife . . .
If I'd seen you first, you'd believe in this guy.
                  
I see you're alone, can I buy you a round
How long has it been since we've really sat down,
and whispered those words, and stolen that touch,
Lord knows we both wish that I'd seen you first.

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#2April 29th, 2006 · 04:00 PM
77 threads / 59 songs
923 posts
Netherlands
well, first good to see you succeeded the uploading issue.

then the song, i think Randy Newman wouldn't be disappointed if it was his.
(its just your voice that reminded me to his name)

guess that makes clear what i think of it, good job, but to be honest not my kind of style

great guitarwork
#3May 1st, 2006 · 09:46 PM
13 threads / 12 songs
149 posts
United States of America
nicely written song, the tune is classic country heartbreak ala mickey gilley.the mix as far as the vocals could use some work-i mean like the harmonies volume is weak..overall i like the song.
#4May 11th, 2006 · 08:50 PM
30 threads / 5 songs
757 posts
Australia
Smooth production ,  the vocals could sit a little better but for this application they've got a quatity  , liked the harmonies,guitar work compliments .
Got any more would like to hear. 
#5May 12th, 2006 · 12:38 PM
7 threads / 6 songs
21 posts
United States of America
Thanx y'all for the listening and the reviews . . .  and especially for making an old country-ish music kinda guy feel ok about posting his tunes on what thus far seems to be a predominately "rock" oriented musicians site.  Yes, Blakhatz . . . there's more, likely later today if all goes smoothly.
Afterall . . . variety is (allegedly) the spice of life.
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