hi folks
after some little jam sessions we decided on some themes and arrangements. Its not perfect, but we didnt want to spend more time on it. the solos (keyboard, guitar)  were improvised as u  probably notice
Please just tell us what u think

if u want u can sing along. the lyrics are easy :
Popcorn ?  Yeah (clapping)

on demand we can upload a karaoke version

so long,
TPM

workin out.............could be a noodle????

youve gotta handy drummer there!!!!

listen yourselves and vote?

splash

Groovy song. I like the effects on the rythm guitar.

keyboarder is the only convincing player to me, drums are well done but sound a bit unsure, bass too

the guitarist in me says yours needs some improvement..., dont be too modest i'd say to him

so to me you have a nice band here but needs to grow, get certain of yourselves

and that is very possible with a lot of time and hard work, i'm sure of that!

btw. whats your instrument TPM?

Well now I am the keyboarder, but we usually write the Posts together.

Thanks for the critique. You are very right, we all are a bit unsure.
Promise some more refined stuff next time !

I really like the keyboards on this track.

This song would have been perfect for a much faster guitar solo.

thanks for all the answers, we are happy about every feedback.


@ MaxdB : do u mean we should play it just a bit more certain or what do u mean exactly by unsure ?

get more certain on your instruments is what i mean, especially the guitarist, it sounds so(too) shy..(guitar is not very well in tune too     ) as if you are afraid to disturb anyone?

you could get so much more out of it when i listened the track, so i though i'd might kick yours asses a little bit, thats all 

take a deep breath, and play your ass off i'd say

in the beginning i hear a great drumbeat with a lot of snares, but it never comes back, too bad!

keyboardsolo is fine, thats what i mean, improvising with guts!