This is just a rough draft really.  I just wanted to put something out there to get everybody used the eccentricities of my music.  What you hear is not what you're going to get.  Sorry! 

Anyways, I hope you guys enjoy it!

Huh?  What do you mean by:
Because I like what I hear - this is really well put together and recorded.  Ok, I can "feel" that it's not finished - but there's a promise of great things here.
I think the only thing I don't really like is the sound of the drums when they come in at 2:13 ish - they sound like they're played in a cardboard box!
Other than that - good sound; although I do prefer the more "gentle" parts!!

does this mean it is or isn't your work? I am confused.... it sounds great... I agree with JiminUK aka Sir Riffsaplenty 

      The first part is nice and soft, and great... the rest is hardcore, and while I kind of like it, it isn't my bag... but it is well done, and awesome work....

        So, if unfinished, and not really what your doing, then why battle? just curious...

                   Jim "Da Noodle King" K

don't know why it reminds me to some opeth's song (can't remember the name).. that's a good thing of course 

Really like the piano solo at the end..

also liked the drums, not the sound but how are the patterns constructed.

Ummm.... the beginning sounds about 90% identical to the song A Perfect Circle - The Noose, i think we might have a copyright issue here.... but other than that its good. It's pretty good how it gets crazy after 2min except the drums sound awful like you are kicking the table and the floor to get the snare and the kick drum..... and the crazy part is completely different from the A Perfect Circle - The Noose beginning.... which is an absolutely awesome song (a perfect circles song im talking about). And then a whole different thing to finish the song? a piano part, this is really 3 songs, A perfect Circle, crazy hardcore part with awful drums, and sweet beautiful piano at the end.... its all well played but it doesnt fit.

The beginning sounds awesome.
I guess the change to the metal part is too abrupt. But that heavy part sound good, except for those awful drums; you must solve that sound problem. But the structure part of the metal section sound great. You have a good notion of making a metal song.
Liked the clean guitar break.
The end is pretty cool too, I must say. Lovely.
I wonder what did you use to record this song? Some MIDI sounds? All at home?

         > Iszil "Sir Shredsalot"

i know the drums are terrible...it's a machine, what can i say?  no machine matches the energy of a real drummer....

everything was played by me iszil.  piano-guitar-bass-synth....


and what i meant by "what you hear is not what you get" is that usually (being the eccentric writer that i am) if you like a part of the song i'll probably destroy that notion by coming in with something random as hell...

and though some big influences of mine have been mentioned (apc-opeth) i promise you, i don't break copyright laws.  to tell you the truth, i didn't even think about it being similar (which i realize now it has similarities) until you mentioned it.

i love this kinda stuff...................

but not this one..................

dont know quite why....................aaah yes 2:15 ish................crap drifts in..........The quality of recording of the first bit doesnt compare with the thrash............bummer

your style does not work..........

and i dont care if u used samples......they just dont work together.

Glad to hear this is not what we will get.........assign it to nooodling please

fish

splash

The beginning of the song is very good, nice strange rithem also the feeling is very good, the end is a bit the opposit, feeling is gone, straight forward, not my style altough the basslsolo and the actual closing chorts are great.

wow swordfish...if you could be less of a dick about not liking it that would be fantastic.

well it's pretty interesting, but it feels a bit incomplete without vocals / message

I like the guitar thrashing et al, although I find it unclear where it is trying to go or what it is aiming at.

so I hope to hear your real stuff up here, if this is not it.... well... it could be good.

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I really really liked it up untill it got over the top heavy, cause without vocals it just doesn't seem to have enough structure, just seems to go no were. It was good though. I like the Thrashing (I'm guessing you do too...hence your name....and the music *raises one eyebrow*).
Is that drumming real or computer generated?

I liked the first part......hmmmm I dunno what happened after that...

    I think I fell off the chair or something........or hit the wrong key

    I liked the ending...........  the middle part??  hmmm YUKKIE ...grin
  
     but.... I think you have talent!

     
      NT4M

I like the diffrent parts,  just the sound of the diffrent parts don't give the song
continuity. they don't feel like they're recorded with the same quality. oh well what do i know. just keep writing and don't pay to much attention to what's said.

sta wena pero fome