I Just Bought A Keyboard

you got the guitar going, drum beat is fine but either thats a pretty cheap keyboard or you chose the wrong sound because that is not sounded very great. if you can change it i reckon you should because from my point of view it's not very pleasant, although, now listening to it for the 2nd time i have to say the guitar fits in well but still play around with that keyboard sound as you said you "JUST" bought a keyboard.

I cant really rate this very high considering it's not REALLY a song it's more of a umm little tune with a few interesting parts, still don't understand why people put stuff like this in battles but ok... i talked this much so i will rate it!

Not bad.. not bad..

As I listen.....

   The guitar is pretty decent....  I see you named it after you played it back...  and there was no writing, it was strictly I got a new keyboard, lets play around... as it doesn't flow with the guitar well,  this is a noodle....  I love noodles, but noodles don't belong in battles.In case you don't know what a noodle is, go to my website http://thenoodleking.com.. you should declare peace.. otherwise you wont be able to delete it later, and you will be stuck with it...unless mud is kind, and unlocks it for you...  this should be put up to me as a noodle track, and I could grant thee knighthood in my Royal army...

                         Jim "Da Noodle King" K

yup, like jim said...this is just kind of..."hey look there is something musical happening!"...weird keyboard noises though, i'm assuming that's what you're going for?  job well done if so

Hey Gonzo!

I think this song is an experiment of your kerboard utilities, so don't put it in to the battle. one of us usually upload a noodle songs, for fun, or to find new tunes with jam sessions, but we don't start to battle with that.

Welcome home dude!!

You will learn so much here as many of us.

Yup - it's not a song to battle with!!!
I thought the guitar at the start was great - I know, the keyboard's new so you wanted to play about with it.
The recording quality's pretty good too - although the keyboard sound isn't that great.
Do what Jim K suggests, and declare peace for this battle.  Then he can decide whether you deserve a title - and if you're worthy to join us at his table

Sir Riffsaplenty

Weird experiment.
That keyboard sound is weird, and I wouldn't use it for another song, but considering the title of this ans the feeling you wanted to express I guess the sound works.

        > Iszil

Zappa meets floyd,and much was consumed! Im confused

hey

i don't like the keyboards neither , the sounds is strange , but it think if you practise more it could sound great.