Inspired by the movie

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I dont know but it seems to me that you are not really play(wit your guitar) in the right measurement,..i mean(just as a positive crittic) try to do this again but then try to listen to the beat.
 good luck.,...btw nice music ya did good luck

I like how you played off the beat at times. I see where your going with the song and I like it.

i like the sound of the guitar and the melody its playing i gotta admit very nice!
the bass is really really foggy and smudged and isn't really very tight with the drums. I really do like this song though the sound of the guitar is awesome so is are the drums just lets fix up the bass and maybe a little bit longer... looking a bit further ahead, lets use that guitar melody as a melody line in a whole new song and add vocals then when the vocals pause you can play that guitar melody... sounds like a plan

anyhoo thats pretty good song you got going, like i said melody is fantastic

The timing isn't perfect on the lead guitar but that was intentional. Thanks for the advice and criticism. Maybe one day I'll be in the same league as the rest of the guys on this site.